Poems/Vending/stories

Posts : 2 Join date : 2010-06-20

Nice girl.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:26 am

Yo David haven't seen you in awhile.

Posts : 457 Join date : 2010-07-20 Location : The Darkness

Pain of a broken heart

Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that your gone I know you meant "never"

Saying you love me with that look in your eye
And that was a cold hearted lie

Your tender touch, a soft kiss
Two things about you I will miss

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due

I should've cried a long time ago
But I loved you so

I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind

A hurt so deep it cuts like a knife
But wounds heal and I'll go on with my life

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:45 pm

That seemed sad to me why was that?

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Wow loved the poem Inferno^^

Posts : 457 Join date : 2010-07-20 Location : The Darkness

i wrote that poem during a break up Jerica Uchiha so u must of lost someone you loved dearly and thanxs Yumi Lockheart

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:13 am

Shy Girl
Im way to scared to tell you
Come on cant this wait
But will I tell you how I feel
before its too late
I tell myself be brave
my time is running out
Forget it Im too shy
the words just wont come out
I see you passing by
Ok heres my chance
Again I let you go
with just a simple glance
Why should I tell you
well maybe another day
But really its no use
You wont like me anyway
So I make up my mind
I decide to let you go
I think I could love you
Oh the things you'll never know

Posts : 457 Join date : 2010-07-20 Location : The Darkness

Just Let Go

We had a lot of fun
When we were together
I'll never forget
I'll always remember

The laughs that we shared
The dreams that we had
But those dreams changed
And they left me sad

I know you've moved on
And found someone new
But I have to admit
I still wish for you

This isn't healthy for me
I really need to stop
When I think about our past
My heart wants to pop

So as I say my last goodbye
I want you to know
That I'm trying my best
To learn to just let go

Posts : 110 Join date : 2010-07-12 Location : Nihon, Japan

Demons come.
People go.
The house built to protect.
But it was always you I neglect.
Such soft eyes filled with doubt.
I cannot even begin to mount.
The feathers separate and start to fly.
So we chase after it through the sky.
Through the deserts, through the ocean.
Over land and over mountains.
The chase is for the memories
Yet all I see is seminaries.
This rhyming must stop
Before I begin to drop.
The mother I loved so long ago.
Was replaced by a coven made of snow.
Such steel I use to fight them off.
Though they keep coming more with a troth.
I miss you deeply, why wont you come back.
For it was only you I ever had.
This girl I see reminds me of you.
Though the you I knew is now gone, long gone from you.

I can't write very good poems. T_T

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:34 am

Nice job peoples^^ I suck at writing...T.T

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:22 pm

Oh you can do it Leon.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:07 pm

What I like is slashing people making them run,
but that damn Ichigo always ruins the fun.
He thinks he is cool and gets cocky,
well I just say that he just gets lucky.
If I ever meet him it will be his end
because he will die in that moment then.
There will be no more birds to sing,
as I will became a king.
Here in Konoha I just have one advice for him before I go
no one wants you here so get your butt moving from here Ichigo.
~From Grimmjow Jaggerjack

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:07 pm

I protect my town from hollows,
but that darn grimmjow creates so many sorrows.
He always slashes away with his psychotic smile
you think he would be in joker's file.
He appears here and there to know ya,
even here in konoha.
Dont let that cat fool you with his words,
he always rant about being above the lords.
Everyday i have to hear him ramble on and on,
i just feel like throwing him a rock weighting a ton.
As i come to my last words to say,
let me tell you grimmjow is gay ;P
~From ichigo kurosaki
Poems/Vending/stories - Page 5 Grimmj11

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Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:32 pm

That was cute Ichigo and Kitty cat Grimmjow.

Posts : 42 Join date : 2010-07-10 Location : sound village

the two of you, i speak of Ichigo and Grimmjow are childish.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:27 am

(Immature if not childish.)

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:17 pm

You two are boring they did a good job.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:42 pm

Hiding in the Dark

The flames adorn.
While I'm left here to scorn.
These lights fade and go.
Is that why I don't see you so?
Scavenged from below and ripped apart.
We all have a little bit of heart.
I'm keeping myself alive.
Keeping myself alive through your deceased eyes.
The glass walls penetrate my inner core.
How do you feel?
Angered? Overjoyed? Repelled?
This is my confession.
You keep coming, over and over.
Though I'm finding it hard to breath.
They're blood pigs, blood pigs everywhere.
Wearing masks, pretending to be us.
Pretending to be you.
Stealing identities.
Echoing back and forth over and over like a record player on repeat.
These scars represent the sacred.
The moon pulverizes my eyes.
Now we all bow our heads and cry.
The scandals, the lies, the skies, all in great memory of the dead.
The dead itself, never looked so good...

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Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:31 am

That's a good one.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:42 pm

Very nicely written Miharu.

Posts : 75 Join date : 2010-07-16 Location : Demon Realm

Quite wonderful poem Miharu.

Posts : 110 Join date : 2010-07-12 Location : Nihon, Japan

You all write better poems than I can.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:31 am

Thanks Crawflex ^^

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Thu Aug 05, 2010 1:31 am

Your poem was pathetic and disappointing Kurogane.

Subject: Re: Poems/Vending/stories Mon Nov 07, 2011 3:52 am

Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:: Your poem was pathetic and disappointing Kurogane.

Shush you D:< I liked it. It's not bad so mehhhh >:O

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